Comments for Shadow Logic

Comment on Organized Chaos 1.0 preview by Maurice

Maurice — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 18:21:54 +0000

i think the web site is pretty simple and i believe that color blue doesn’t make sence with a punk/rock band go with like black: purple in some cases> the website looks more like a fan page then an actual blog of a band. if u know what i mean.

Comment on Organized Chaos 1.0 preview by Meera

Meera — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 15:17:02 +0000

Okie, so I obviously can’t give you as detailed a critique of your work as that Jeff dude can, but I CAN tell you that it’s really good. I have a question. When it is actually going on the website, will it have writing over the gray portion? If it will, then that is pretty much perfect; if it’s just going to remain blank space, then I agree with Jeff- fill it up with a little more stuff.
But, on the whole, this is completely amazing. (Yeah, and here I am, barely able to critique something like this, let alone make something like it! XD)

Comment on Organized Chaos 1.0 preview by Jeff

Jeff — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 01:33:21 +0000

That’s quite nice, the feelings that the design evokes are quite suitable towards the chaos idea.
I just have a few minor ideas
The c in chaos in the upper left looks a bit too similar to the o, you might want to make it a bit more distinguished
The bottom edge of the layout feels empty. I think it needs to be different from the rest of the layout, but not so stunningly obvious.
In the upper right, you have the menu overshadowing the background. This is quite nice, but you have a tiny bit of the edge of the content box there. Sorry, it just sort of bothers me.
At the top, the font for the menu items needs to be altered a bit, I believe. Some of the letters have a very slight grunge effect on them, I believe you should strengthen the effect a bit and adding it on to other parts of the text.
You might want some sort of logo or symbol in the top left there, along with Organized Chaos.

I would also like to ask, what’s the point in the blue edge on the left? If it’s just the background, you might want to move the content box over a bit to center it more. If it’s part of the content boxes, you have two thinner segments on the left and one large segment on the right. If this was so, it doesn’t look quite right to me.

This brings me to another question. Is the design that seems to be on the content box actually on the content box? Or is it part of the background? If it isn’t I’d suggest you turn down the opacity just a bit on the big box, and up a bit on the left hand navigation (or I’m assuming it to be so). This will create a sort of contrast between the two. I’m not entirely sure how it would look, but it seems like a reasonable idea to me.

Just my basic opinions on the site, along with a few suggestions. It’s a brilliant piece of work.

Comment on Portfolio by Snoopy

Snoopy — Sat, 21 Jun 2008 00:39:17 +0000

a very interestin gwebstie Leo, very interesting

Comment on Randomness and Boredom by Madhavan

Madhavan — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 00:50:01 +0000

Look at Henri Cartier’s photographs and you will learn a few new tricks.

I have a set of books that I can loan to you - speak to your classmate Meera if you are interested.

You are a good photographer and ave the natural ability.

Good luck

Comment on Randomness and Boredom by Manas

Manas — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 23:30:36 +0000

NICE, MAN YOU ROCK whooooohooooooooooooooooo, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Comment on Randomness and Boredom by meera

meera — Fri, 13 Jun 2008 00:00:50 +0000

today has been a day of surprises for me. first i found out that harold could write really, REALLY well, and now i’ve found out that you are amazing at photography. these photos are really awesome!!!!!

Comment on Happy mother’s day by Jeff

Jeff — Sat, 24 May 2008 15:04:00 +0000

‘Sup Leo! Sorry, I’ve forgotten to check back in a LONG time >.>
Anyways, 70 views in a day is a lot. Gratz xD
Your Gimp skills seem to be improving. Nice job.
Eh, See you around.

Comment on Happy mother’s day by Leo

Leo — Sat, 17 May 2008 19:13:37 +0000

This website is more for showing off my work and blogging. I know what you mean though, it’s empty without something fun to do. I don’t think I’ll be adding games on here for a while, but that Game of the Week is a good idea =]

And Shadow Logic averages about 30-50 visits daily. It had 78 visits on my birthday =D

Comment on Happy mother’s day by Anthony

Anthony — Fri, 16 May 2008 23:33:16 +0000

Leo! Happy Mother’s Day to you too! This article does seem a bit…outdated if you will? But this is quite the website! You actually have potential. I do suggest, with all due respect, that you…light this website up…so to speak! Gray and white and black? Repulsive! Unless you’re “emo,” and I’m not entirely sure you’re “emo,” even though you do say your favorite color is black. Also…is it possible for you to get people to advertise on your website? You could make quite a bit of money! How many views do you have now? Also, I suggest you include something…fun? on the website. This was probably meant for older people to be reading, but you ARE a kid and a lot of kids DO LOOK at this site…a game of the week, perhaps? Check out addictinggames.com Apologies, for not emailing you, but i was too lazy. Well, see you in school!
-Anthony